從一朵鮮花對仗又來學(xué)校說起

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從一朵鮮花對仗又來學(xué)校說起

      剛剛六點半起床，腦子里突然蹦出一朵鮮花對仗又來學(xué)校�；�點時間，順著這個思路，寫點對聯(lián)以及對聯(lián)體詩的體會。

一朵鮮花

又來學(xué)校

      表面看來，這不是工對的對子。但我過去十多年來，與全國近十萬詩聯(lián)友在QQ詩聯(lián)群和網(wǎng)絡(luò)詩聯(lián)論壇里出對求對的經(jīng)驗看，這副對子是工對的。這也是當(dāng)今參與聯(lián)界對對子的詩聯(lián)友的共識。

      首先，又不是數(shù)詞，是副詞，但含有第二次再一次的意思，相當(dāng)于數(shù)詞二。所以，一對又，不是數(shù)詞對仗作勝似數(shù)詞對仗，是借義對仗，而不是詞性對仗。很顯然，又來學(xué)校，是通順的，成立。一朵鮮花也是成立的。特別是鮮花對學(xué)校，名詞對名詞，工對。所以一朵鮮花對仗又來學(xué)校。反對的詩人，一定搬出，這是語法錯誤的對子。這種論點從詩的角度看，是對的。但從聯(lián)的角度看，就錯了。因為，當(dāng)今聯(lián)壇，這種對仗比比皆是。我呢，只不過是將兩副對聯(lián)合成一首對聯(lián)體詩而已。于是，就有了《對聯(lián)體詩律則（草稿）》“十、根據(jù)聯(lián)律“允許不同詞性相對” 的規(guī)則，對聯(lián)體詩同樣可以“暖暖”對 “淙淙”，“聲”對“響”�！钡囊�(guī)則。不必非議我的律則了，這個律則其實也是這十多年來本人浸淫聯(lián)壇的總結(jié)。

      順著一朵鮮花/又來學(xué)校，我繼續(xù)寫下去于是，一副工整的對聯(lián)寫出來了。

又來學(xué)校溫功課【羅志海】

一朵鮮花映月光【羅志�！�

      尊敬的詩人讀者，難得你讀我這一篇文章，你也許想評論一下吧。不過，你如果日后想成為一個偉大的語法家，那你就從語法上說起評論吧。還有，你還可以從犯不犯孤平，有沒有三仄尾對三平尾等等入手分析對與錯。你如果日后想成為一個偉大的詩人，就順應(yīng)聯(lián)界與詩界的不同，點贊吧。我呢，只不過是把兩副對聯(lián)合成一首新詩，是詩聯(lián)新詩種而已，不必大驚小怪，群起而攻呀。

羅志海/文

2019年1月9日星期三 6；30至7：20

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美好詩句

筆下詩窮搜舊夢
囊中句少釀新辭
嬌花寵柳婆娑葉
佳麗美眉颯爽姿


Beautiful Verses

Under my pen
poems in poverty
search my old dreams

In the poetic bag
verses are less
make the new lyrics

The tender flowers
the favored willows
the whirling leaves

The beauty
the beautiful eyebrows
valiant and heroic in bearing


1/15/2019對聯(lián)體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7666首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,666th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/cruise-3/#content

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緣份來了

桂舟釣月柳垂線
絕頂馭云風(fēng)響鞭
百慮難通禪道境
三生難了愛情緣


Fate Is Coming

In a laurel boat fishing a moon
a willow hanged a thread
On the tiptop
riding a cloud
wind whipped loud

In the three lives
difficult to cut the fate of love
Thinking a hundred times
hard to get through the states of Zen and Tao

1/19/2019對聯(lián)體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7698首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,698th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/bill-and-coo/#content

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山林

細(xì)雨千絲滋紫陌
春風(fēng)一縷暖芳林
梅山款待識香客
竹舍隱居種柳人


The Hill Forest

A wisp of the spring breeze
warmed the fragrant forest
A thousand silks of the drizzle
moistened the purple road

In the plum hill
entertained guests knowing aromas
In the bamboo cottage
lived in seclusion
a person planting willows

1/23/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7728首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,728th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-real-scholar/#content

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四季

春苑拾來皆是句
冬節(jié)醉去不知年
一行鴻雁繪秋色
幾個黃鸝鬧夏天


Four Seasons

In the spring garden
what I picked up all the rhymes
In the Winter Festival
I got drunk didn’t know time

A row of the wild geese described the autumn colours
A few orioles noised in the summer

1/27/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7765首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,765th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/steed-s-hoofs-gallop/#content

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風(fēng)雨頌

詩園蘭韻笑迎雨
塵世玉魂何懼風(fēng)
朗月清溪潺古韻
黃鶯紫燕頌春聲


Ode Of Wind And Rain

In the poetic garden
the orchid rhymes greet rain smilingly
In the dust world
why does the jade soul fear wind?

The bright moon in the clear stream
murmuring the ancient rhymes
Voices of the yellow orioles and purple swallows
eulogize the spring

1/30/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7794首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,794th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-beggars-chicken/#content

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激動

山水閒暇秋漸老
筆毫精妙韻尤新
月升夜晚相逢意
花落時分離別魂


Excitement

A writing brush is fine and ingenious
the rhymes are especially new
Mountains and water are leisurely
the autumn is gradually old

Moon rising in the evening
moods in meeting
Time falling flowers
the parting souls

2/2/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7830首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,830th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/water-ink/

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春夏秋冬

梅山雪谷寒冬畫
電閃雷鳴炎夏歌
春潤荒原鋪綠毯
秋行騷海泛銀波


Spring, Summer, Autumn And Winter

Lightning flashes and thunder rumbles
a hot summer song
A cold winter picture
in the plum hill
in the snow gully

Autumn walks in the poetic sea
ripples the silver waves
Spring moistens the wasteland
spreads the green blankets

2/5/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7860首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,860th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... heir-heads/#content

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飄泊

人立天邊參北斗
身居海角望南山
蝴蝶夢里桃紅墜
日月泉邊柳浪翻


Wandering

A man stood in the horizon
to see the Big Dipper

When he lived in the sea corner
he overlooked the South Mountain

In the dream of the butterfly
the peach blossoms were falling

Beside the spring of sun and moon
the willow waves were surging

2/10/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7897首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,897th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/years-long-and-short-sigh/

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自在

沉浮一笑魄無礙
進退兩宜客自閑
筆若流云風(fēng)順順
心如止水恨綿綿


Unrestrained

A smile ups and downs
my soul is unimpeded
Advance and retreat
both appropriate
my guests are leisurely and free

My pen like a flowing cloud
wind is smooth
My heart like the stopping water
hate is continuous

2/17/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7941首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,941th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-candlelight-poetry/#content

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禮德誠信

白露涼秋緒
大寒飄雪花
禮德傳世寶
誠信主人家


Ethics, Kindness, Credibility And Integrity

In the White Dew
the cold autumn moods
In the Big Cold
snowflakes floating

Ethics and kindness
treasure handed down
Credibility and integrity
the master’s family

2/19/2019格律體新詩 ● 五絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7974首對聯(lián)體詩
The 7,974th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-moral-courage/#content

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自由恬淡

幾時小我才恬淡
一個湖泊最自由
朵朵霞飄山腳下
盈盈月上柳梢頭


Free And Indifferent To Fame Or Gain

What time will I be just indifferent to fame or gain?
A lake is freest
Pieces of the pink clouds floating at the foot of the hill
The limpid moon goes on the willow tip

2/23/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8008首對聯(lián)體詩
The 8,008th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/happiness-into-the-gate/#content

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詩性閒情

蝶采花心多好色
夜深酒鬼更貪杯
養(yǎng)君詩性五千竹
陪我閒情三萬梅


Poetic Character And Leisurely Feelings

Night is deepj, a drunkard is too fond of drink
So lechery, the butterflies suck hearts of flowers

Culture your poetic character with five thousand bamboos
Accompany my leisurely feelings with thirty thousand plum flowers

2/27/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8040首對聯(lián)體詩
The 8,040th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/unwritten-books-2/#content

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輸與贏

輸卻三分淡
贏來一晌閑
溪流落葉雨
人佇飛花天

Lost And Win

Lost one-third slight
Won leisure of a part of the day
A stream flowed fallen leaf rain
A person long stood in the flying sky

3/6/2019格律體新詩 ● 五絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8070首對聯(lián)體詩
The 8,070th Two Pairs of Couplets
       
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/sunward/#content

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地大物博

風(fēng)搖細(xì)雨梳垂柳
花映野鳧戲鏡湖
白首一節(jié)博物志
琳瑯滿目證明書


Vast Territory And Abundant Resources

Wind shakes drizzle
combs the weeping willows
Flowers reflect
the wild ducks play in the Mirror Lake

A superb collection of beautiful things
the certificate
The Naturalis Historia
despite old age, ambition never fades

3/11/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8110首對聯(lián)體詩
The 8,110th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-comic-book/

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難忘的歲月

數(shù)度霜冰，陽臺春滿新桃媚
幾經(jīng)風(fēng)雨，月下秋盈老桂香
山中勁柏，默數(shù)世間煙火色
湖里游魚，歡迎宋代水仙王


Unforgettable Years

After many storms
full of autumn below the moon
the old laurels are fragrant
Frost and ice several times
full of spring on the balcony
the new peaches are charming

The strong cypress in the mountain
silent to count colours of smoke and fire in the world
The swimming fish in the lake
greet the Narcissus King in the Song Dynasty

3/19/2019格律體新詩 ● 十一絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8128首對聯(lián)體詩
The 8,128th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/deadwood/

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秋天

黃菊向晚斗霜綻
朗月經(jīng)秋隨夢潔
遒勁松風(fēng)陪鶴舞
清涼石椅請君歇


Autumn

The yellow chrysanthemums in the evening
fought frost blooming

The bright moon experienced autumn
followed dream cleaning

The vigorous wind of pines
accompanied cranes dancing

The cool stone chair
please rested on it

3/23/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8166首對聯(lián)體詩
The 8,166th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/exquisite-pen/#content

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奇人

竹枝常入畫
柳色喜迎春
坦蕩守林漢
安恬直發(fā)人


Eccentric Persons

The bamboo braches often enter into the paintings
The willow colours happy to greet spring
A quiet man with straight hairs
A magnanimous person guarding the forest

3/31/2019格律體新詩 ● 五絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8205首對聯(lián)體詩
The 8,205th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/wind-crazy/#content